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Teen Poetry #6

Day Dreamin'

molly_the_dolly
Junior Member

since 2003-02-12

Posts 25
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-02-15 01:29 AM

You look at me and smile,
Then take me in your arms,
hold me and i feel safe.
The sparks are about to fly,
here it comes.
It's time to kiss,
I tremble with excitement,
and hope it will never end.
Then I hear my name being called,
faraway but getting closer,
and suddenly, you're gone,
back across the room.
It was just a day dream.
I look at you longinaly,
then turn away,
only to return to reality.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-02-15 10:33 AM

I enjoyed this so much...I was a big day dreamer...still am I think

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2003-02-20 06:45 PM

molly_the_dolly~
This is so beautifully written.
I very much enjoyed the read.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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