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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE 
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The night is crying for me Taking the formation of the raindrops That hit against my window Pitter patter...pitter patter... It hurts her to see the pain in my eyes To watch the tears trail down my face So she starts to cry with me Telling me that it will be alright As the minutes pass by into hours She soothes me with her enchanting sound Letting me breath out the pain And breath in the relief The drops fall slowly now I am content, yet again, with the world The sorrow will still linger slightly But I have come to terms with my loss She'll cry for me another day When the clouds are gray And the moon disappears She'll cry again... * |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
wowie jenn. i really liked this one. great job!  If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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OtherSideOfTheMirror Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 245 |
I like that a LOT. It was a really really good idea and well thought out, well written. Nice job! |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
this is really good. I don't know exactly who its written about, but it reminds me of my relationship with the goddess.(I'm Wiccan) Again, it was very good. thanks for the read. Jenn think about this: everyone you know will someday die. |
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