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SuffocationInMyLife
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since 2003-01-28
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0 posted 2003-02-12 10:40 AM


If i killed myself today
would they remember?
if i suffocated myself today
would they remember?
if i got in a car crash and died
would they remember?
would they remember me?
remember how i was?
how i use to make them feel?
or would they just forget?
just forget me like that?

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Triskaidekaphobia
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...
1 posted 2003-02-13 08:08 AM


A very honest poem.
  I think that these questions are ones that everybody asks themselves at least once in their lives, and I mean everyone, even those annoyingly cheerful people.
  In my experience these questions are the very thing that stops someone from following speculation through to act. They allow you to see things from others viewpoints. Not just your own selfish one.

There should be a psychology of feet. For do we not make decisions with our legs and walk about on our brains? What do you mean "No, not really"?

NSnaomian
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since 2002-07-22
Posts 232
In my troll closet I be
2 posted 2003-02-13 10:03 PM


Thats true, they are very honest questions and I can say I have thought about them...
It all boils down to...well you'll know :P
teeheehee
Good job of presenting this.
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

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