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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-02-07 06:16 PM


I was a newbie too,
From a yonder place...
Somewhere across the ocean.

Chorus:
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But...
But I was wrong...
I was never weak.
Everything I done is a marker...
Of my past... my passion and my sadness.

I was wrong in that I fear-
To be a newbie.
Yet some of the best memories are
The moment I try new things.

Fear...
Is what holding me back...
Each time when my surroundings change.

Being a newbie has nothing wrong...
It is the fear...
That makes me panic...
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I was a newbie too,
When I was switching school...
To an... an unfamiliar place.

Repeat Chorus x 1

I was a newbie too,
When I hit the dancing floor...
Wished I... I make everything right.

Repeat Chorus x 1

I was a newbie too,
When I start my website...
Always... praying that... I won't get virus.

Repeat Chorus x 1

I was a newbie too,
When in yonder days I write poetry...
Thinking that...all ink wasted

Repeat Chorus x 1

Maybe I am not praying...but I know...
You are always listening...to my soul...



[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (02-08-2003 03:30 PM).]

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NSnaomian
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since 2002-07-22
Posts 232
In my troll closet I be
1 posted 2003-02-08 04:27 PM


This is really good, I love your ongoing journey in this!
Keep it up!
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

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