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Darkness Member
since 2002-10-17
Posts 202The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies. |
Sink into that addicting smile As we try to cross the boundries Of what we limit ourselves to To see the stars from up above Shining rainbow colors and blinding eyes We need not fear What stirs the hate In this so called "Melting Pot" If we are supposed to intertwine In harmony... Then we have no need for A color coded sociaty Instead of a "Melting Pot" We are more like a bag of M&Ms With everybody locked inside Their thin candy shell It is sad that some Red M&Ms dislike the Blue Just because they have a different color Aren't they all chocolate on the inside? Why limit our people to color or race? Why can't we be brave, And taste their chocolate, Before we judge them. What happens when you leave M&Ms out in the rain? Thats right! the color washes away And no one can judge based on color anymore You have to taste the chocolate first. |
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Susie Junior Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 36Illinois |
hey that was really good and it had a really strong message that i every1 would realize. unfortunately there r people that judge based on looks alone and thats 1 of the biggest mistakes people can make.good write! |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
I like M&M`s. *Allison* "I`ll be your crying shoulder |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
 )...Oh wait. That's Smarties...  Darkness: Really enjoyed this. Strong message, great analogy. Poetry is a great way to get your message across. Hopefully, everyone will see the message in your words. Keep writing! Leah  |
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barbaraj Member
since 2003-01-24
Posts 139Nova Scotia, Canada |
 this was a really nice poem to read. got a strong message across. keep up the great work.  ~You can make more friends in two months by becoming interested in people, than you can in two years by trying to get people interested in you.~ |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
wow I Loved this one!!  I'm just kickin it up |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
Yay! M&M's are soooo good. I really liked this and the message is soooo true. Great job with relating race to colors of something of interest. Laura "All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life." |
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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
yum Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you...... |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
I still like m&m`s. *Allison* GO GO GO GO GO GO Go |
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molly_the_dolly Junior Member
since 2003-02-12
Posts 25Ontario, Canada |
That was a great message that should be herd by everyone. we are all the same inside, it is too bad that there are shallow people out there that worry about skin color, relgion, or even the clothes we wear or music we listen to. we are all humans and we all deserve the same respect! it is so true when they say treat others like you want to be treated. great poem! keep up the good work! |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
Now that was nice! I like the M&M analogy. That was great. And it has a strong message too. Great poem! |
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Triskaidekaphobia Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 251In a state of disrepair... |
To repeat everyone else great analogy... But what are those limited edition colors you sometimes get in M&M's ? Are they aliens? Great poem! There should be a psychology of feet. For do we not make decisions with our legs and walk about on our brains? What do you mean "No, not really"? |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sam~ Great job on this. What a creative way to make a very important statement. VERY well done. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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