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AJMGW
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0 posted 2003-02-06 12:42 PM


You know how it feels,
to be unable to think clearly?
You want to run,
but you don't know where you're going?
You want to talk,
but you don't know any body?
The Newbie!
Yeah thats you're name.
The unknown,
The uncared,
The Newbie.

~AJMGW~

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Victoria7
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1 posted 2003-02-07 11:13 AM


i liked it, it was short and sweat!
Jenn Cirrincione
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2 posted 2003-02-07 11:35 AM


All are welcomed here.
We all were once newbies
Nice job

Jenn

"Now I'm convinced that he's heaven sent, and must be out of his mind- mama he's crazy, crazy over me."

aries_luv_ppl
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Universal Mind
3 posted 2003-02-07 06:12 PM


I was a newbie too!

Maybe I am not praying...but I know...
You are always listening...to my soul...

barbaraj
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4 posted 2003-02-08 12:35 PM


i liked this. short sweet wonderful. we were all newbies so we all know the feeling.

~You can make more friends in two months by becoming interested in people, than you can in two years by trying to get people interested in you.~


Marshalzu
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5 posted 2003-02-08 06:41 PM


A great read, thanks for sharing
Riley
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6 posted 2003-02-08 08:04 PM


Even if you don't believe it, i once was a newbie. Yeah, and pip helped me a lot...long story...great poem


Riley L. Grant

Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you......

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