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Today I Sit Thinking

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Sweetpoet16m4u04
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0 posted 02-04-2003 09:39 PM       View Profile for Sweetpoet16m4u04   Email Sweetpoet16m4u04   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sweetpoet16m4u04


Today I Sit Thinking…

Today I sat thinking of you
Hoping and wishing you think of me too
I know it may be just a crush
But when I see you there my heart just begins to rush.

I sit here thinking of you
You are the one that makes my skies blue
And the sun that illuminates my day
I will be there to protect you if any danger or harm ever comes your way.

You may be thinking that these are just words on paper
That isn’t true!! I want to give you my ever-caring heart
If you are sure that you want to be the keeper
And promise not to break it apart.

Well now the day has come to an end
I wrote these feelings hoping to be more than your friend
When tomorrow comes I will be thinking the same
Hoping and wishing that you are the one to end my pain.
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Victoria7
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since 01-28-2003
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1 posted 02-07-2003 10:52 AM       View Profile for Victoria7   Email Victoria7   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria7

I thought your poem was awsome!!!!!!!!! but be careful makeing a friendship something more. I did once and lost one of my best friends b/c him and i ended on bad terms. But the best of luck to you and hope something great works out for you
moonguardian2004
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since 12-01-2002
Posts 63
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2 posted 02-10-2003 08:37 PM       View Profile for moonguardian2004   Email moonguardian2004   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moonguardian2004

hey-
this is a very good poem. i get a different feeling from reading it than i do reading your other poems. all in all it is very heart warming. i bet the girl you long for would be lucky to have you. friendships with love are the hardest things to keep strong
cherrys_rule
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3 posted 11-09-2006 05:23 PM       View Profile for cherrys_rule   Email cherrys_rule   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cherrys_rule

Hey,
ok I just have a question, are all your poems on the same chica. I was just wondering. But you did a great job on this. I hope to see more from you in the future. Thanx for sharing, w us.
 
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