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Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

0 posted 2003-02-04 07:55 PM

So this is it.
You've left.
I eat my leftover rice
and pretend I don't care.
Puddle of Mud is playing
but it's not loud enough so I turn it up.
It's kinda funny how Reena and I
have deep conversations over MSN and
when I'm at her place we talk superficially.
I look mournfully at my cup;
can't fill it up cause all my juice is gone.
There... Reena feels better.
Now what about me?
"Will you be okay?"
When am I ever NOT okay, Sarah?
She looks at me and I know that
I'm stronger than this and maybe this time
I'll let myself cry when I need to.
So I go real quiet and just about choke on the
anguish that threatens to overwhelm me...
And I realise that no, I won't cry this time, either.

wvplayernotreally
Member

since 2002-11-06

Posts 215
yakima wa

1 posted 2003-02-04 08:44 PM

seriously emotional, You bring a passion to your poetry. It was good, good detail. Nice job
"I'm stronger than this and maybe this time
I'll let myself cry when I need to.
So I go real quiet and just about choke on the
anguish that threatens to overwhelm me...
And I realise that no, I won't cry this time, either."

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

2 posted 2003-02-04 08:57 PM

*smile* I know how that feels. *smooches* Another wonderful poem.

My muse died. *pokes limp muse* Yep. Its dead. lol...

Kielo

I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing.

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

3 posted 2003-02-05 02:06 PM

I hope you're okay Rhonda.

You can sit there and forgive someone until the cows come home, and it won't make a bit of difference until they forgive themselves.

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

4 posted 2003-02-05 05:33 PM

*hugs*

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

5 posted 2003-02-05 09:59 PM

Gone to seattle... Seattles boring. Sorry. This poem was good, It had a lot of pain in it, though, hope you're okay... I liked it. Hope things work out!

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

6 posted 2003-02-05 11:30 PM

Sounds like CwboyAtHeart needs to move...just kidding. And Rhonda, sorry, but i'd have cried. Excellent write.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

7 posted 2003-02-06 03:14 PM

Not being able to feel much emotional pain, I know what that's about---you know I can relate, and am here! Hmmm...I like your style of writing, it's not quite a poem...and not quite prose---it's like Funker Vogt---the happy median between Techno and Industrial...except, rather than music---you're writing! Keep it up, Raiden!

Vekrdehk fyc dra uhmo drehk E fyc kuut yd...pid, yd maycd E ymfyoc vuikrd vun fryd E pameajat eh...

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