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Silent~Inspirations Junior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 13 |
White, round rain drops smother the Earth. I can count them like broken promises. 1,2,3,20 You said you would be here. Maybe its the white, round rain drops, that keeps you from home. Knowing it's a substance and not the smothered Earth is an evil chilling to the heart Mom, Dad please come back from hell on Earth come back home. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
The poem...was sad....but there was something missing..i cant really put my finger on it...but its there...well keep on writing... Regina "heaven truley knows that thou art false as hell...one that loved not wisely,but too well..she swore..'twas a strange ,'twas passing strange"-othello |
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