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StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

0 posted 2003-02-01 06:54 PM

It's funny how I can go from feeling in control,
To total confusion.
Fixmefixmefixme,
I'm sick of being like this.
My head hurts from crying,
I'm just sick of it.
Everything's going the opposite of the way I want it,
.sdrawkcab gniog lla s'tI
[If she doesn't love you back...
Then she must be insane.]
I regret ever writing this,
Forget it.
[fixmefixmefixme]

"It's hard to look in the mirror these days when everyone has everything you'd rather be."-Saves The Day

ZetaCel
Junior Member

since 2003-01-30

Posts 18

1 posted 2003-02-01 07:05 PM

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"Opinion is nothing more than ones point of view."

StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

2 posted 2003-02-02 12:10 PM

Reading back over this, I realize how jumbled and mixed up and confusing it is. I guess I subconsciously meant it to be that way to illustrate my state of confusion..or something along those lines.

Cinderelly
Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

3 posted 2003-02-02 12:51 PM

I actually like how it's "confusing" It's a great read and . . . Anyways, good poem!

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

4 posted 2003-02-02 12:54 PM

I really liked this. Very much.

It was very easy to feel your frustration, and anger. I didn't find it overly confusing. You just didn't lay the situation out exactly, which makes it easier for readers to understand. Very cool.

Kielo

I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing.

ZetaCel
Junior Member

since 2003-01-30

Posts 18

5 posted 2003-02-02 09:52 AM

!krow doog eht pu peeK .siht ekil deklat uoy woh ekil I

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"Opinion is nothing more than ones point of view."

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

6 posted 2003-02-02 02:50 PM

I'm impressed. This is a very good expression of your confusion... I like

Monkey!!

StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

7 posted 2003-02-02 05:36 PM

Thanks. *insert big smile here*

"It's hard to look in the mirror these days when everyone has everything you'd rather be."-Saves The Day

Jaime

Registered

Member
Posts 250

8 posted 2003-02-02 09:27 PM

Ditto. (to what has been said..)

I like how it's all over the place and curling and uncurling.

Well done.

- Jaime

Shiva went on break now look at how much it's gonna take to make this place a space where we can breathe.

WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

9 posted 2003-02-03 09:11 PM

This was...interesting. A jigsaw puzzle, but I agree with everyone else...

It drove me crazy...I am crazy...yeah...but hey people enjoy confusing me...Nice work! I liked it. ~*~Kirah~*~

I lie all the time - infact Im lieing right now!
Today is yesterdays tomorrow.

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