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NeverSayDie Junior Member
since 2001-01-18
Posts 39Duluth, MN & Grand Forks ND |
He I sit Alone again I am still here But where are my friends I sit I think I wish I know Things have change My mind does know My heart does hurt The love is gone And with it goes the things I long |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
I liked this poem, it seems to me that i'm always sitting alone and longing. I found this deep  I'm just kickin it up |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
intersting...i read a little while ago..but im only getting around to replying to it today...oh well...anyways..i did really enjoy the poem. i thought your format was very kool,it packeda punch with the short lines...it emphasized...anyways..good work Regina "heaven truley knows that thou art false as hell...one that loved not wisely,but too well..she swore..'twas a strange ,'twas passing strange"-othello |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Unfortunately things change as life goes on...whats meant to be will be and whats not wont..unfortunately thats how life goes and it sux sometimes....i liked your poem a lot..i think a lot of people can relate, myself included Standing on the edge of the world |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
"The love is gone And with it goes the things I long" Sometimes, it's a good thing that the things one longs are gone. I understand where you're coming from in this one. I like it. You didn't beat around the bush with this Monkey!! |
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