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PrincessNets
Member

since 2002-10-30

Posts 103
NewYork, USA

0 posted 2003-01-31 09:43 AM

I haven't posted in a while and I'm not quite sure that this poem is good, but I am posting it anyway. Tell me what you think.
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Here I sit, alone again
Not really fitting in anywhere
People are sometimes friendly,
But I wonder if they care.
They have lives of their own
And it seems that there is
No place for me
In their rigorous schedules.
I can't do anything,
Not even in my free time
I have no life of my own
All my time is spent
Doing things for other people
Never for myself
Yet it seems that
No one truly care.
No one seems to care
That I spend my time alone,
Watching sad movies
And balling my eyes out
No one has any time for me,
The girl everyone "likes".
So, with that
Here I sit, alone again.

AJMGW
Member

since 2002-11-19

Posts 57
Galaxy Roller Rink

1 posted 2003-01-31 11:44 AM

I really like it. a strong feel to fit in. Good.

AJMGW

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

2 posted 2003-02-15 06:26 PM

I LOVE this poem!

I TOTALLY relate to this poem and it's exactly how I feel sometimes. Good job hun!

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2003-02-20 07:01 PM

PrincessNets~
Ouch...this one hurts.
You've done such a good job of expressing
the emotions in this piece and I felt
every word as I read.
Nicely done.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

4 posted 2003-02-20 08:48 PM

amen. I feel like this also, but who to tell, I've written one too sad poems, watched one too many sad movies, hopeing something will relieve this lonelyness. Its feel like you do everything, you try so hard, but its all in vain. I could really relate. Thanks for sharing, its nice knowing I'm not so alone in being alone.

~Lexy

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