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SuffocationInMyLife
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since 2003-01-28
Posts 9
New york USA

0 posted 2003-01-29 03:24 PM



I thought that love would never come
until i finally found the one
who brings me love everday, someone i am proud to say
is the new love in my life
the one i can see as my wife
2 raise kids and grow old together
2 build a love, a love that would last forever
i cherish everytime i talk to you
hoping you feel the sameway to
even though we live far apart
U will always hold the key to my heart

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AJMGW
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 57
Galaxy Roller Rink
1 posted 2003-01-30 12:39 PM


Hey! That's really good. I so happy that you could find "the one". I personaly haven't found that person yet. But awesome poem!


AJMGW

wvplayernotreally
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since 2002-11-06
Posts 215
yakima wa
2 posted 2003-01-31 01:38 AM


wow I hope thats what its like for me when i find "the one" good write...it pulled me in

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

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