People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today.
~Bella~

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A good write here. I liked what you wre trying to say. I might fromat it a bit different, and maybe, just maybe, work on the meter (flow, rhyme, etc) of the poem.

I notced you had soem lines twice as long as the subsequent lines.... I generally find that distracting from the poem, because it doesn't allow the poem to just flow off of my mind's tongue. You know?

"Between the span
of my gentle hannds,
lives a stranger.
Beyond my "pretty eyes"
theres a mystery unfolding.
A mystery you've come
too too* close to solving.

If you run fast enough
you can catch a ride.
Let your feelings be your guide,
the* fear become your light.

Discover me..

Beyond the standard glance,
is the look of love,
waiting.
Uncover the unseen.
The image beneathe
is fully* captivating.

Find the real me.

Between the* black and white*
I've drawn* a silver line,
follow it through
and you'll find me.
Solve the puzzle.
Complete me.
Uncover me."

I really enjoyed the poem. Those are just some thoughts of mine. Hope you enjoyed them. It not, it's totally cool.

~Titus

Es ist gut, daß das Leben die Toten studieren sollte.