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ShadyMakaveli
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since 2002-08-21
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0 posted 2003-01-28 04:11 AM


When people breakdown searches for help begin
Does anyone even care to hear their cries
Or has this world lost every bit of compassion
Taken advantage of once won't fall for anymore lies
Learn fast or become a victim to this heartless world
Nothing lasts forever so get ready for goodbyes
No one can understand one's struggles from within

Scary finding people not being who you thought they were
Can't help but worry for the generations to follow
Pressures of life growing with each passing moment
This feeling I have inside is leaving me hollow
Been through so much at time I wanna cry
This world is overbearing, more than I can swallow
Enjoying everything I can, the rest is just a blur


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EleanorMoonbaby
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since 2002-09-02
Posts 202
England, UK
1 posted 2003-01-29 05:40 PM


Interesting write with a sort of pessimism about it that doesn't go overboard on the obvious negativity. I liked it. Dude, you've improved as a writer so much in such a short time. Nice one.
Ellie

I'm not dead, OK? I'm just a little electroencephalographically challenged!

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