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BabieDoll
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since 2003-02-13
Posts 268
BFE

0 posted 2003-07-06 05:19 PM


Sitting in the darkness
Refrained from every light
Every breath an inch closer
To unimaginable fright

Losing what's left of sanity
Taking it all in
Tasting tears on wet lips
Remorsing over sin

Sweat perspires from a brow
Tracing a pale face
Caressing cheekbones as it slides
At a slow and steady pace

Mind is screaming in denial
Heart racing to an extreme
Then suddenly it's realized
That it is all a dream*

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

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peachesNcream
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since 2001-08-21
Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears
1 posted 2003-07-06 05:29 PM


Good work! I like it! ~Jess

"If I could give you one gift it would be my eyes...So you could see how it feels to be me looking at you." -Unknown

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