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Alnilam
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since 2003-07-04
Posts 75
0 posted 2003-07-06 01:25 PM

Here is a new one I just wrote and tried out at a different forum, but no one seemed to have any imput on, so lets see if anyone has anything to say here.

Just one
One little pill
Just one
To feel the thrill

Just one
One person's heart
Just one
To tear apart

Just one
One time with you
Just one
My life is through

Just one
One stupid dare
Just one
Misplaced care

Just one
One life to take
Just one
For people's sake

Just one
One little shot
Just one
To end this thought

Just one
One coffin please
Just one
Life that's seized

Just one
One minute of hope
Just one
Person to cope

Just one
Beginning
Just one
Life's  end

~*Alnilam*~
"The worst tragedy for a poet is to be admired through being misunderstood."
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Lexy
Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038
California
1 posted 2003-07-06 04:24 PM

wow..that was so simple, but indicated alot. very sad...
~lex
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