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Anthony's story
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Anthony's story |
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AJMGW Member
since 2002-11-19
Posts 57Galaxy Roller Rink |
Why do I try? I'm tired of this! Always getting hurt, I just want to quit. I need to stay strong. For Erin and my mom. And Anthony, Now thats a story. He still loves Ashely. (Thats why hes not with me) They! Then why is the there with Abby! Well me? I'll be fine I just wish Oneday Someone will be mine. AJMGW |
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OtherSideOfTheMirror Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 245 |
This seems very much written for you. I think you could try changing the title as the poem really doesn't tell Anthony's story. This seems like the kind of poem that has a lot of emotion from the writer, and not so much the words. That can be good, too. I like it well enough and especially the ending. Good work! |
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AJMGW Member
since 2002-11-19
Posts 57Galaxy Roller Rink |
Thanx. I like when I haer what others think. I hope to see some from you!  |
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