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Pollita
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0 posted 2003-01-26 03:58 PM


...Ok so I didn't really have a title for this one...I just wanted to feel important...LOL!


We' ve known eachother for a while now, We built a strong friendship.
We can tell eachother anything, We wouldn't be judged by one another.
Then why do I feel, That I must hide something.

Scared of what you'll think, I just turn away.
Pretending that nothing is bothering me, I keep the problem to myself.
I convince you, That it's just an ordinary day.

You still think something's wrong, You can tell by the way I speak.
Yet I still wont give it up, I still act like I have no worries.
It isn't any use though, Eventually I'll tell you.

I wish that I knew what words to say, To tell you the truth.
I can't keep this to myself, I need someone's help.
Although, avoiding you seems like a smart plan...

Sorry but this one isn't as good as my last one. But oh well...Im writing!  

~*Bruises fade father, but the pain remains the same, I still remember how you kept me so afraid, Strength is my mother for all the love she gave*~

[This message has been edited by Pollita (01-26-2003 04:17 PM).]

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OtherSideOfTheMirror
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1 posted 2003-01-26 07:36 PM


Hmmm now i wonder what the secret is.... :-P
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2 posted 2003-01-26 10:35 PM


This obviously has a lot of heart in this, Delaney...hmmm---I wanna talk to you about this though, k hun?

Vekrdehk fyc dra uhmo drehk E fyc kuut yd...pid, yd maycd E ymfyoc vuikrd vun fryd E pameajat eh...

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3 posted 2003-01-26 10:37 PM


Bwaaaa!!!! *hugs* I'll talk to you about this when I'm less busy hunny, I promise *writes it on her forehead*
snoduck
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4 posted 2003-01-27 12:00 PM


I've been there before.  I really liked this and it's true, it does have a lot of heart in it. I hope things get better for you.  Thanks for sharing.

-Erica-

Pollita
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5 posted 2003-01-27 04:37 PM


Okay Alex we'll talk...and yes rhonda...we'll talk to...those other 2 people...thank you for reading and replying to my poem
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