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blakloks
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since 2002-06-01
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0 posted 2003-01-26 11:03 AM


Are they doing it on purpose?
I can’t stand the farce
Smiling, waving, cheery voice
When inside me I want to cry.

Hypocrites, every last one of them
Apologetic looks
Sorry, can’t help you
When they don’t mean a word of it.

I’m nice and kind,
They say
And You,
You don’t care what people think

Don’t I?


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smurf_gurl
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since 2003-01-20
Posts 19
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1 posted 2003-01-26 01:19 PM


bah, I feel like I'm repeating myself since I had a responce written, then WHOOP it goes away. *blinks* just...left! lol.

quote:
Are they doing it on purpose?
I can’t stand the farce
Smiling, waving, cheery voice
When inside me I want to cry.


for some reason this reminded me of the airhead cheerleaders at my school...not to say that all cheerleaders are airheads, don't get me wrong. that's why I said at my school, lol.

quote:
Hypocrites, every last one of them
Apologetic looks
Sorry, can’t help you
When they don’t mean a word of it.


hypocrites are going to be everywhere you go...better get used to them

quote:
I’m nice and kind,
They say
And You,
You don’t care what people think

Don’t I?


The Don't I here didn't make much sense to me...nevermind, I just reread it and it does make sense now. I think I get it anyway...and if you're saying what I think you're saying, which is you do care what people think...let me tell you, the only ones that matter are you, your parents, and God (if you're a religious person x_X). Don't worry what everyone else has to say. in the scheme of things, they don't matter.

anyway, great read. Thanks for sharing
~Stace

Boredom is killing me...
Boredom is killing...
Boredom is...
Boredom...
.....

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