Woah, that was really really awesome! That was just such a cool idea for a poem! I really LOVE this one! I especially liked the line, "There's a hidden shadow to everything, something left unseen." Great Job!
WinterWren "Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."
Awesome.. I loved it. The whole i'm wrong your wrong were all wrong made me think of ice cream for some reason though! ~lol~ that I scream You scream We all Scream For ICECREAM!! (hehe) Sorry, i'm a little HYPER right now. kissa
I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling