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Middle Ground

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lil cherry
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0 posted 01-25-2003 10:57 PM       View Profile for lil cherry   Email lil cherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lil cherry

Iím wrong
Youíre wrong
The world is wrong

Everythingís messed up
Nothing works the way it should
Itís all just a blur

Light and dark
Dusk and dawn
The misunderstood middle ground

How can anyone be truly right
We donít know all the answers
Itís all a matter of opinion

Backwards forwards
Up and down
Which is wrong, which is right

Iím wrong
Youíre wrong
The world is wrong

Iím the misunderstood middle ground
I canít make you understand
I canít make you believe

That none of us are really wrong
Thereís a hidden shadow to everything
Something left unseen

Itís no ones fault
Thereís no one to blame
Just walk away

Forget everything
Itís useless to you
Theyíre feeding you lies

The world is wrong
Iím the misunderstood middle ground
And you canít have me
© Copyright 2003 Angel - All Rights Reserved
OtherSideOfTheMirror
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since 12-19-2002
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1 posted 01-25-2003 11:06 PM       View Profile for OtherSideOfTheMirror   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for OtherSideOfTheMirror

I like it. A LOT. The middle ground thing is just.. a GREAT idea. It's just so very very good I really enjoyed reading it and it really has purpose which is really good.
WinterWren
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2 posted 01-25-2003 11:15 PM       View Profile for WinterWren   Email WinterWren   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WinterWren's Home Page   View IP for WinterWren

Woah, that was really really awesome!
That was just such a cool idea for a poem!
I really LOVE this one! I especially liked the line, "There's a hidden shadow to everything, something left unseen."
Great Job!

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

lil cherry
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3 posted 06-04-2003 11:57 PM       View Profile for lil cherry   Email lil cherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lil cherry

i'd still like to hear a lil more about this one.  thanks for the compliments tho.
~~*lil cherry*~~
kissa~rachelle
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4 posted 05-07-2004 04:55 PM       View Profile for kissa~rachelle   Email kissa~rachelle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kissa~rachelle

Awesome.. I loved it. The whole i'm wrong your wrong were all wrong made me think of ice cream for some reason though! ~lol~ that I scream You scream We all Scream For ICECREAM!! (hehe) Sorry, i'm a little HYPER right now.
kissa

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