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CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14
Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2003-01-23 07:23 PM


Alright, I know, it's an odd title...  N' if anybody has a problem with it, let me know and I'd be happy to change the title.  Anyway, I wrote this during History, of course...  Well, let me know what you think.

JACK DANIELS: FRIEND OR FOE?

They thought she was happy
But she was more of the same
Found her life in the bottle
Thought Jack Daniels was a friend
Said her life was perfect
But every day brought pain
Lost herself to the bottle...
Jack Daniels shot her down

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

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wvplayernotreally
Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 215
yakima wa
1 posted 2003-01-23 09:51 PM


dang dissing on the girls...i liked this one yet again. sounds like kids in w.v eh? haha wow i wish i had your history class so i could do nothing

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

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