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CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14
Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2003-01-21 06:12 PM


I wrote this poem today in History, also...  About how me and my gf are 1800 miles apart, but sometimes it feels like we're not.  Anyway, your thoughts are appreciated.  

DISTANCE

There are times that I can feel
The warmth of your kisses
Though still you are so far away
Sometimes I wonder if distance is real
Or if it is only there
If you let it be...

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

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wvplayernotreally
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since 2002-11-06
Posts 215
yakima wa
1 posted 2003-01-21 08:31 PM


Thats good...i felt bad because it was all by itself so i decided to post. Good job. i liked it alot. even though i am not experiancing it :-\

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439
I am everywhere
2 posted 2003-01-21 08:33 PM


Awww, I'm sorry you two are apart!

I liked the poem, though. and I loved the two ending lines
"Or if it is only there if you let it be".

Best of luck, and keep writing!


smurf_gurl
Junior Member
since 2003-01-20
Posts 19
US of A
3 posted 2003-01-21 09:01 PM


Hey there, dork. :p 'member me? haven't talked to you in awhile...you still on aol? if you ever see me on, send me an IM every now and again, I miss ya...

anyway, yes, it was a wonderful poem. nd i wish you and your girlfriend the best of luck

Boredom is killing me...
Boredom is killing...
Boredom is...
Boredom...
.....

*Belabebeautiful*
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since 2003-01-03
Posts 696
washington, USA
4 posted 2003-01-22 11:24 PM


Hey guy!! I really like this one!! I think that this one is actually my favorite so far and it's the shortest one yet! lol! But sometimes simplisity is the best way to make it work!!

Live and laugh and make sure to always have Bella Amor (beautiful love)
~Bella~

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