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Teen Poetry #6

What Life Could Be

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2003-01-21 06:09 PM

I wrote this today in History... It's rather lame, but that's okay. lol Anyway, let me know what you think about it.

WHAT LIFE COULD BE

Maybe I think too much
Of what life could be
And maybe I'll just live
With the fact that it's not

But if elephants could jump
There'd be more earthquakes
And if pigs could fly
We would all get our way

Do the roses ever stop
And take time to smell you?
What if the ugly duckling
Never peered into the pond?

If the world revolved around you
Would you have a moon?
If stars made a wish on you
Would that wish be granted?

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

[This message has been edited by CwboyAtHeart (01-21-2003 06:14 PM).]

snoduck
Member

since 2002-11-15

Posts 99
Selah, WA

1 posted 2003-01-21 07:17 PM

hey i'm in your history class!!! well coolness i think i actually read this the other day in history... but i'll tell ya this is just... so touching -tear tear- i actually like it...
"Do the roses ever stop
And take time to smell you?
What if the ugly duckling
Never peered into the pond?"
lol great stuff cody.

-Erica-

[This message has been edited by snoduck (01-21-2003 07:19 PM).]

foreverwithyou
Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 204
Wonderland

2 posted 2003-01-21 07:26 PM

this was really good i didnt
think that it was lame at all
i havnt read much of your work
but i really liked this one.
CATHY

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2003-01-21 07:47 PM

It's not lame, it's just different, and different is good! I like this poem alot! especially the last couple lines, well actually all the lines but those ones really stuck out in my mind. Makes you think, which is good.
Great Poem! Enjoyed.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

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