The Strangest Thing (All right, Vicky, you win)

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Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

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0 posted 2003-01-19 05:11 PM

It was my eyes...
their dark brown depths pulled you in;
One glance made you mine
although I didn't know it
(I was mostly concerned with escaping from class)
It was my eyes...
their gaze mainly focused out the window;
I'd make with you the occasional contact
oblivious to your interest
(I hooked you the day I walked out of class like that)
It is my eyes...
the ones who softly gaze upon you now;
You say you could look into them forever
and who am I to stop you?

Android 17

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since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
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1 posted 2003-01-19 05:29 PM

Hehehe! I liked this! It was...kinda sweet! Sounds like a romance story! I want more...

Hehehe---but seriously...this flowed incredibly smoothly. (Which I thank you for, me being in my current state and all)

You know the day's gonna be bad, when you start it off---with Sephiroth at your door, demanding his toaster back...

Kielo
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since 2002-02-11

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2 posted 2003-01-19 06:33 PM

*grin* You write so far beyond me, my dear. ... I just called you "my dear." I really must be going senile. Loss of memory, loopiness, and grandmotherlyness. Yikes. Anyway, you blew me away again. *smile* You never fail.

(I love you more)
Kielo

I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing.

Pollita
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since 2002-07-25

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the unknown realm of insanity

3 posted 2003-01-19 06:44 PM

Rhonda I liked this alot!
It was sweet. and thats what these people need! I liked your Critique message! it was a good laugh. Next time your online and you aint away I might need to talk to you. I just might ya know. ur special. because I can tell u stuff. and now you get to hear my pathetic problems!

It must be very fun!
LOL
Again---the poem was great!

WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

4 posted 2003-01-20 12:36 PM

I like this poem alot, especially the end. Good job! by the way, Im curious, what did Vicky win?

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

PoetryIsLife

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since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

5 posted 2003-01-20 03:30 PM

Very sweet, very well written, Rhonda.

We need to talk soon, my friend.

~Titus

"A life unexamined is not worth living."
-Socrates

[This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (01-20-2003 03:30 PM).]

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

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6 posted 2003-01-20 04:48 PM

An interesting read

My Violent Bedtime Stories

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

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7 posted 2003-01-20 09:33 PM

Alex: do you REALLY want more? Cause now that I've been proven wrong, I'm sure it won't be hard to write more.
Kielo: I don't write beyond you, I'm in that little alley way to your left

Thanks hun
Del: I promise I'll talk to you soon lol. *smiles* Thanks for sayin it's sweet

WinterWren: thanks! Vicky and I had an informal, unofficial bet going that I wouldn't be able to last very long without writing a sappy poem. Unfortunately I lost, and I wrote that poem. *sighs* I can see many more coming now that the first one's been written.
Ti: Thanks

We do need to talk soon. Very soon.
Andrew: Thanks

I've finally got Will power!

WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

8 posted 2003-01-21 01:30 AM

Thanks I can continue with my life now that I know that.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

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Somewhere... out there...

9 posted 2003-01-21 11:34 AM

Rhonda~
I'm smiling...not just because I win,
but because 'happy' looks good on you.
Hugs,
~Vicky
P.S. I win!!
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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