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Teen Poetry #6
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Missthang
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since 2001-07-03
Posts 103


0 posted 2003-01-18 11:56 PM


I want you to...
Sing to me!
Tell me how you feel!
Let me know it's real!
Let me know it isn't!
Talk to me!
Call me first!
Plan something for us!
Surprise me!
Put forth some effort!
Be real with me!
Make time for me!
Be there for me!
I want you to just be you...consistantly.

"Whatever you are doing, love yourslef for doing it.
Whatever you are feeling, love yourself for feeling it."
       -Thaddeus Golas

© Copyright 2003 Adamma Bankhead - All Rights Reserved
topsyturveychick
Member
since 2003-01-19
Posts 57
Bris,QLD,Aus
1 posted 2003-01-19 04:00 AM


I love it.  It's short and really to the point.  Sounds like something that u would give to like a bf or somethign when u were going through some tough times.  Eaither that or u jsut felt that u had to get everything down on paper and this is what came out. 8/10

**Topsy**

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