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Missthang
Member

since 2001-07-03

Posts 103

0 posted 2003-01-18 11:53 PM

I see this everyday,
I wish I were blind.
Day in and day out,
your love is devine.
It's been proven once,
though you'll do it twice.
Please show me again...
oh, how nice.
I CAN have it,
it's not just you.
In the palm of my hands,
in time it's true.
I need it now,
a tease over my head.
So what's really wrong?
Passion's not dead.
Who am I kidding,
it's not that lame.
Take what you have,
I'm wishing for the same.

"Whatever you are doing, love yourslef for doing it.
Whatever you are feeling, love yourself for feeling it."
-Thaddeus Golas

[This message has been edited by Missthang (01-19-2003 12:30 AM).]

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2003-01-21 03:09 PM

I hope you do get what you want

thanks for sharing
wonderful read

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2003-01-21 03:52 PM

Good poem, nice flow to it. I especially liked the end. Well done!

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

3 posted 2003-01-25 05:38 PM

hey,
this was really good
and it flowed well.
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

barbaraj
Member

since 2003-01-24

Posts 139
Nova Scotia, Canada

4 posted 2003-01-25 08:14 PM

great poem

flowed quite well. nice ending.

A Person Who Asks A Question Is A Fool For Five Minutes, A Person Who Doesn't Is A Fool Forever ...

OtherSideOfTheMirror
Member

since 2002-12-19

Posts 245

5 posted 2003-01-26 12:22 PM

Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!!!!!!!
Like it muuuuuuuch

Yes I'm typing a lot of letters multiple times.. call it... EMPHASIS! heh heh heh... hope someone else laughs at that cuz i will feel mighty dumb. wait nevermind too late.

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