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WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

0 posted 2003-01-15 09:26 PM

I had to do it and I did....I'm done! You'l see what I'm talkin bout below...
~***************************~

My grip has loosened.
My mind is free.
You fade away from me.

Day by day, I'm forgetting what used to be.
Day by day, I'm letting go.
Night by night, I cry a humble song.

I won't forget you.
There are memories.
I'm on my own, one final flight.

My grip has loosened.
I'm letting go.
Fly away, don't look back
~**************************~

Did ya get what I mean.....?

*Mistakes are made, you pay for them, then you do it again.*
~*~Love doesn't make the world go 'round, it just makes the ride worthwhile~*~

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

1 posted 2003-01-15 09:51 PM

I totally get what ya mean. I know the feeling... Sometimes it's really hard to let somebody you love go, but you have to do it... There's others out there, life goes on... Well written, I enjoyed it. Thanks for posting! By the way... I love your name!

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2003-01-16 03:55 PM

Very good poem! I especially liked the line, "I cry a humble song." Great Job!
It is hard to let go, I've had to do it too many times, and Im proud of you for being strong enough to do this. Chin up!

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

BrokenAngel
Member

since 2002-01-06

Posts 141
Puryear, TN, USA

3 posted 2003-01-16 06:18 PM

Wonderful write, I know what your talkin about. Really hope everything goes good for you!!

Read my work and read my thoughts
I'll go back into the night now
---Night Angel

NSnaomian
Member

since 2002-07-22

Posts 232
In my troll closet I be

4 posted 2003-01-16 07:52 PM

I got ya exactly and I wish you the best of luck! Great poem to bring out what you're feeling and your actions!
Yay!
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

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