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Teen Poetry #6
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rOxXbabY391
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since 2002-12-14
Posts 71
0 posted 2003-01-15 06:58 PM

Second pick
Second face
Second choice
So second place
For once I want to come out on top
For once I want to win
Just once I'd like to be number one
Especially to him
I'll never be his first pick
I'll never be "the one"
I'll always be that one girl
He liked just for fun

"I don't think I can make it through one more night. 'Cause how do you answer "What's wrong?" ~ when nothing is right."
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Darkness
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since 2002-10-17
Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.
1 posted 2003-01-16 10:38 AM

That sucks that people just mess with emotions like that. This was good! the flow of it was exellent and I enjoyed reading it a lot.

darkness
lonelyone2032
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since 2002-11-17
Posts 13
2 posted 2003-01-19 07:36 PM

Hey Emily! i really liked this poem. Keep up the good work.
much luv,
   ~Ash~
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