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LTEvans
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since 2002-12-06
Posts 72
Lenham, England

0 posted 2003-01-13 10:46 PM





Melodrama in the highest,
An overdone soap opera,
Where all the sky is purple.

Whatever you say,
That I ever want to do,
You can’t stop me,
Only watch me,
Do you want to push me?
Do you want to kill me over?
Please help me to please the health,
Help me please to end myself,
I need you without your tactile defence.

Melodrama in the highest,
An overdone soap opera,
Where all the sky is purple.

Please don’t let me love again,
Hollowness always suits me,
I’d love for you to love someone else,
Don’t enquire after my health,
You must know that I’m already said,
If you can feel you fool yourself,
If you hate then hate me,
Help me please to end myself,
I need you without your tactile defence.

Melodrama in the highest,
An overdone soap opera,
Where all the sky is purple.

Solipsism saves us from the atavism of the Equalitarian.

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OtherSideOfTheMirror
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since 2002-12-19
Posts 245

1 posted 2003-01-14 07:16 PM


I like that. It's dramatic and cool and the purple sky thing is neat... I really really like that... creepy as it seems.  Keep up the good work!!!

-Other

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