Those Little Words Ran Away

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jeffwillett
Member

since 2003-01-04

Posts 86
Texas, US

0 posted 2003-01-12 09:27 PM

-Those Little Words Ran Away-

I went to speak and the words weren't there
And I don't know where they could be
I've searched the place I had them last
But I think they're avoiding me

I looked inside my bedroom closet
I crawled under my bet to
I really need to capture those words
And deliver each of them to you

Every single of those little words
Were so special in their own way
But now they are gone, I don't know how
I hope they return one day

I think I remember some of them
I would like for them to be here
These words, they were, so wonderfully placed
I even some how made them clear

If one of them happens to find its way back
Although I'm not too sure they would try
I'll make that one tell me where the others went
And then I'll search low and high

When I find each and every one
I'll make sure that they get to you
And if I remember before they get back
There's one thinkg I'm sure I will do

I'd tell you that the one at the front
It could have started with an I
There may have been a love and a you
At the end was a great big sigh

I went to speak and the words weren't there
And I don't know that you could see
That every time I look your way
Beside you I've always pictured me

OtherSideOfTheMirror
Member

since 2002-12-19

Posts 245

1 posted 2003-01-14 07:07 PM

Arighty...

Well first what brought this to my attention was NO REPLIES! So all of you reading this, start posting replies because there are a lot of works here with no responses and that doesn't seem fair...

Now that poem was the most feeling poem I've ever read by you. I personally thing it was well written and a cute poem, especially how the words are "lost"... but really lost in other ways... It was creative and interesting and a good read, so I commend you and can't wait to read more!!!

Nice work kiddo!
~Other

lonelyone2032
Junior Member

since 2002-11-17

Posts 13

2 posted 2003-01-14 08:47 PM

aww i thought this was such a cute poem! i loved it! anyway keep of the good work! much luv, Ash

WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

3 posted 2003-01-14 08:51 PM

Wow! this was great! beautiful! wonderful terrific! I love it! Wow. This is awesome. I'm going to add it in my library...this definately deserves to be there. GREAT JOB!!!!! ~*~Kirah~*~

*Mistakes are made, you pay for them, then you do it again.*
~*~Love doesn't make the world go 'round, it just makes the ride worthwhile~*~

jeffwillett
Member

since 2003-01-04

Posts 86
Texas, US

4 posted 2003-01-17 06:50 PM

thanks guys

MattGarcia
Junior Member

since 2003-01-04

Posts 19
Texas, USA

5 posted 2003-01-22 10:41 PM

nice one bro, like they said before, it was cool how the words were lost and that one word, when found, could do so much to bring the others out.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

6 posted 2003-01-22 11:26 PM

That was a GREAT!!! poem! W-O-W!! It was just soo, wait the words are running away, well touching will have to do. I just LOVED this Sooooooooo o o much!
Awesome work!

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

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