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0 posted 2003-01-11 07:41 PM



" One Kiss "
(12/01/03)
© 2003 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

Verse 1
Like a fine cup of coffee on a sunday morning,
The first sip of you just takes me away.
Lots have tried and more have failed to be all that you are
A true Marilyn Monroe of today...

You're the song that I love to sing,
Every hearts biggest secret wish.
My shelter from the rain and wind,
You bring me to life with one kiss...

Refrain
One kiss,
Is all I need from you.
One kiss,
I promise that it's true.
One kiss, just one kiss
From you.
To make everything right.
One kiss,
To built an endless night.
One kiss, just one kiss
From you.

Verse 2
I can eat a good dinner at a fine restaurant,
But It will never taste as good as you.
A sunset is beautiful like candy to my eye,
But doesn't move me the way that you do.

You're the song that I love to sing,
Every hearts biggest secret wish.
My shelter from the rain and wind,
You bring me to life with one kiss...

Refrain

© Copyright 2003 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-01-11 10:00 PM


Oh wow!! I liked this so much!! It was so beautiful! I'm guessing it was intended as song lyrics and it would be the best song! It is also a lovely poem! I know exactly what that feels like, this poem spoke to me! Thank you for the smile!

Live and laugh and make sure to always have Bella Amor (beautiful love)
~Bella~

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2 posted 2003-01-15 01:51 AM



Brian~
This is beautiful.
You've got some great lines in this one.
Nicely done.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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