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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
"Goodbye" (12/01/03) © 2003 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved I stood tall by you side But never realized You were pure evil in desguis Thought I could rise So think twice In the mist of your eyes I lost grip of my pride For all the tears you've never cried Heart of my heart Gone apart Chorus This is goodbye (Goodbye) This is farewell (Farewell) You're no longer mine!! Look I told ya' (Told ya) No more playing (Playing) Cause girl it's all over!! This is Goodbye!!! No good son of a gun You've decived your last one Pandara's box's run out of fun Lost what you had It's too bad Now that we're said and done I guess the right one won There'll be no more calling you hun Too many lies And it's why Chorus |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Brian~ Lots of emotion in this one. I felt the words as I read...you've expressed this well. Nicely done. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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