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foreverwithyou
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since 2002-10-20
Posts 204
Wonderland

0 posted 2003-01-10 04:49 PM


I hope that the person this is for don't get mad at me i doubt they will but u never no ne wayzzzzzzzzzzz yea.........
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What do you do
If someone close to you is stressed?
And it could be that they are literally depressed.
They say that they're fine.
But they all say that.
There's no denying in an AOL chat.
You feel so bad.
You want to cry yourself
You feel so sad
You want to tell them stuff.
But you never know what their reaction will be.
I hope that they will not be mad at me.
They're probaly stressed out.
Too much to do.
You don't want anything more.
You ask "Why so blue?"
Then they will tell you.
And you will tell them.
Then suddenly it seems you've got a really cool best friend.

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

© Copyright 2003 Cathy - All Rights Reserved
jeffwillett
Member
since 2003-01-04
Posts 86
Texas, US
1 posted 2003-01-10 06:05 PM


not bad, kinda hard to follow but i like it
devinechild22
Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571

2 posted 2003-01-10 07:58 PM


This is good. I already told u what I thought a while ago. Yea..But it is good.
           *Allison*

"O My love
Please don`t cry
I`ll wash my bloody hands
And well start a new life"
-Good Charlotte

dinky
Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258

3 posted 2003-01-10 09:23 PM


hey,
awwww i wonder who this is about...
this made me smile
i thought, when i saw the title that it might be bout u no who but then i wasnt sure
and then when i saw that it said they might be mad at you i was like what did she write?!?
this was really good,
it's nice to know that ppl really care and they r able to be talked too
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

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