How can silence be this loud? It penetrates into your very soul Far away you can hear noise But thatís all it is, so far away Itís a dark hole just going on forever Straining to hear just makes it seam further away Panic creeps in as you realise You have a half-hour to go Boredom settles in the pit of your stomach Waiting for you to mix it up to make to go away The windows make the outside seem so inviting Just wishing you could be there is painful Again I hear voices far away I long to be laughing with these people The chair seems to get more uncomfortable the longer I sit there I wish only to be out of this place It tortures me to know the end is still so far away Please take me away from this place Take me away from this living nightmare Make this painful silence leave my soul Get me out of here
Is this about an exam? Cuz I had a really nasty English Lit exam today on Tess of the d'Urbervilles, and it really puts a dampner on an otherwise nice day! Or is it about a really boring lesson? I'm guessing maybe it's to do with school anyways. Correct me if I'm wrong. Ellie
"I'm terribly sorry ma'am, my karma just ran over your dogma"
lil cherry~ I'm so glad to see someone responding to the challenge and I hope to see lots more. Now...for a guess..I'm thinking maybe study hall? Am I close? I'll be back, looking for an answer. Thanks for participating in the challenge. Great job! ~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes
in the pouring rain
ooooh vlraynes so very incredibly close, you're all right it has somthing to do with schoool. but note the fact that there are voices i'm longing to be with, so not everyone is involved, that's a hint right there. thanks for reading! ~~*lil cherry*~~
Member Rara Avis
Somewhere... out there...
that's it!!!!! it's a poem i wrote while i was bored out of my mind in a detention. good job! hey guys please check out my poem perfection, no one has responded yet and i really want to know what ppl think of it, it's not my usual style. ~~*lil cherry*~~
I was thinking In school suspension. Cause of the voices out side, and being stuck in the chair all day... thats just what i thought.... I like this. Not knowing what the hell it is actually about for a while... ~lol~ I have done that with a poem i call 2 worlds..anyways.. awesome poem.. you hit the whole bored out of your mind thing realy well..
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