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EleanorMoonbaby
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since 2002-09-02
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England, UK

0 posted 2003-01-08 05:28 PM


For the record, this was the first poem I ever wrote, when I was, like five. So be nice!

THE TIGER

I'm a tiger, striped with fur
Don't come near of I might Grrrrrr!
Don't come near or I might bite!
To eat you up is my delight!

"I'm terribly sorry ma'am,  my karma just ran over your dogma"

© Copyright 2003 Eleanor Warren - All Rights Reserved
ShadyMakaveli
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since 2002-08-21
Posts 128

1 posted 2003-01-09 01:47 AM


well this shows a promising young talent at an early age, and it's rather interesting to see you using words like delight at the age of 5, very impressive, your a natural, thanx for posting.
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