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0 posted 2003-01-08 12:21 PM


Do I truley love you, you aksed me just today
I thought about your question and it came out this way
I love you like a bunny loves the moring dew
I love you like a child loves a morning fresh and new
I love you like the sunflower loves the evening sun
I love you like a teenager loves to go have fun
I love the way your eyes can see into my soul
I love the way your smile makes me feel competley whole
I love the way your hands touch me when we embrace
and I love your beautiful lips and the sweetness of your taste
I love you like the tree loves the falling rain
I love you as if I'll lose you or never love again
I love you more than reason
I love you more than time
I love you so much, you've even made me ryhme
And so I have to say, I guess the answers true
My love, my one, my only,
Yes I do love you

I wrote this to my boyfriend who told me today that he loved me! It doesn't make much sense but I have trouble making sense with him on my mind!!

Live and laugh and make sure to always have Bella Amor (beautiful love)
~Bella~

© Copyright 2003 Bella - All Rights Reserved
jeffwillett
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1 posted 2003-01-09 06:51 PM


nice poem, i like the analogies..i can't even spell it but y'know!
jeffwillett
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2 posted 2003-01-09 06:52 PM


wait, that's right!
rxyfxy04
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3 posted 2003-01-09 09:33 PM


i really liked that.. very good expressions used.. and love is a wonderful feeling . dont let it slip away!!.. thanks for the smile
PoeTik JusTice
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4 posted 2003-01-10 02:08 PM


Like i said...there isn't a poem of yours so far that I don't like! This is so sweet!! Good work

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
     *~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

CwboyAtHeart
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5 posted 2003-01-10 08:15 PM


An interesting style that many can't pull off very well.  You wrote this week, the repetition worked for you and added to the affect of the poem.  Love is an amazing thing, isn't it?  Thanks for the write, I enjoyed it and good luck with your relationship.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?  

*Belabebeautiful*
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6 posted 2003-01-11 09:53 PM


Hey thanks for your comments guys! Love is an amazing thing!! I'm so happy right now I feel as if I could burst!! But I also find it harder now to try and write what I feel cause I want it all to come out at the same time!! Anyway thanks for the replys!!

Live and laugh and make sure to always have Bella Amor (beautiful love)
~Bella~

Star T
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7 posted 2003-01-11 10:50 PM


hey girl that was really sweet and a wonderful poem at that.i oved it.i'm in a love relationship too and i know exactly what u mean in ur poem.love kinda makes us complete...pls just try to hold on to it.forgive and never stop forgiving.dont break it off cos of some silly argument over some silly thing.okay?just hold on to it.love IS all that matters after all...


**Only the wise can dance to the melody of life**

OtherSideOfTheMirror
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8 posted 2003-01-11 11:09 PM


wow reminds me of one i wrote... Love to Ten... I know how ya feel I think it's a sweet poem... IN MANY WAYS!
vlraynes
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9 posted 2003-01-15 02:27 AM



Bella~
I absolutely LOVE this!
I got the biggest smile on my face as I read this.
You've got some wonderfully beautiful lines here
and your love for him shines through in each one.
I'm enjoying your poetry very much and I hope
to read lots more from you.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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10 posted 2003-01-15 07:46 PM


Another beautifully done poem! This one was very sweet, I liked it alot! Great Job!

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

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