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mara
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since 2002-12-19
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0 posted 2003-01-07 10:32 AM



It's nice to know that you're rooting for me to fail
so my attitude toward everything, should just be"oh well"
I used to think you thought I was smart
but I know you don't, and that just hurts me to mu heart.

When I do good things, its like you don't care
But when I do bad, you make sure that you're aware
I try and try to make it a better day
but like always, you got something negative to say.

From now on, I can see where you're coming from
I know you'll just look at me as if im dumb
But that's ok because I still love you
even though I wonder if you really do.


Mara



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Taurus42285
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since 2002-12-19
Posts 7

1 posted 2003-01-07 10:34 AM


short and sweet straight to point good poem
vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
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2 posted 2003-01-12 02:42 AM



mara~
I can feel the hurt in this piece.  
You've expressed it so well and it touched my heart.
Very nice job on this.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

rxyfxy04
Member
since 2002-11-26
Posts 54
lil' town in Virginia
3 posted 2003-01-12 05:32 PM


i really like this.. it was very good at getting to the point and please dont let anybody get you down... just love and move on!! i really enjoyed this one..

RxyFxy04

dinky
Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258

4 posted 2003-01-12 05:34 PM


hey,
this was really good!
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

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