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Teen Poetry #6

Emus

Stinky Twinkie
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

0 posted 2003-01-07 10:02 AM

Emus I love
whales I hate
I enjoy when they fight
at the secret rubber gate
The emu throws a toaster
and the whale blows air
AAAHHHH! owieeeee!
he fell down the stairs
the whale got up
and tossed a tooth
the emu ate his face
and locked him in a toll booth
Bah Bah Bah
eek eek

-Stinky Twinkie-

[This message has been edited by Stinky Twinkie (01-07-2003 10:21 AM).]

rxyfxy04
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 54
lil' town in Virginia

1 posted 2003-01-07 10:05 AM

travis.. umm.. that was some good action being expressed.. and u have a good use of onomotopia (dont know how to spell.. but u get it!) anyways.. u know i love all ur poems!! keep it up....

RxyFxy04

stephanie
Junior Member

since 2002-11-15

Posts 33

2 posted 2003-01-07 10:07 AM

LOL....What the heck is that about...a whale and a emu fighting...very original! LOL once agian you made me laugh...like always. very good travis.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2003-01-07 11:23 PM

Lmao! That was GREAT!! LOL! But now I know about the secret rubber gate! Stinky Twinkie rocks!

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

foreverwithyou
Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 204
Wonderland

4 posted 2003-01-08 10:04 PM

hey i love emus!!!!!!!i thought that the title at first was AMUS or something that sounded like that lol but this was funny man i have alwayz wanted and emu LOL
###CATHY###

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

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