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Teen Poetry #6

Youthanasia

LTEvans
Member

since 2002-12-06

Posts 72
Lenham, England

0 posted 2003-01-07 08:43 AM

You feel sorry for yourself,
Using synapse simpatico
And systematic sympathy
To resonate authority
Into your spoken sensibility.

Your instability indicates
Somewhat crushed credibility
And a tirade of temerity
For your peppered principals
Are known to abhor morality
And pre-directed destiny.

You favour imperative imperialism,
Overlord enforced fundamentalism,
Glued with forged fanaticism.
Sweating in tight trepidation
While you renovate recreation
And teach subservient supplication.

Zero in on xenophobic zoology,
Correlate condition to conservation,
Gestate generalisation in a nation,
Advertise annihilation for the generation,
And dress it up as a sorry syntax.

By the way the title is spelt wrong intentionally

Solipsism saves us from the atavism of the Equalitarian.

OtherSideOfTheMirror
Member

since 2002-12-19

Posts 245

1 posted 2003-01-21 04:38 PM

Wow that was confusing... but I think it was good??? i can't really tell... the words boggled mean. But it SOUNDED good.

Ephraim
Junior Member

since 2002-12-07

Posts 24

2 posted 2003-01-22 09:05 PM

This was a pleasure to read. A bit, at times, too overly heavy-worded, if you don't mind me saying, but I enjoyed the sense of the poem.

E

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

3 posted 2003-01-22 11:35 PM

I think I've just been insulted most thoroughly. How clever.

[This message has been edited by Kielo (01-22-2003 11:46 PM).]

Jaime

Registered

Member
Posts 250

4 posted 2003-01-23 10:38 PM

Aren't we the busy bee.

Shiva went on break now look at how much it's gonna take to make this place a space where we can breathe.

barbaraj
Member

since 2003-01-24

Posts 139
Nova Scotia, Canada

5 posted 2003-01-24 09:21 PM

very good poem. a bit word-y but good nonetheless

Eromyna
Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA

6 posted 2003-01-24 10:06 PM

Nice wordplay. I think I get it... mebbe.

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

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