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0 posted 2003-06-12 08:40 AM


Thoughts they travel afar, to places beyond the skies,
And Places deep down inside,

To dreams

The dreams I hold inside

Wishing…

Wishing that life was happy and long
Instand of the path to what I belong
The path of the hurt and wounded

The one that leads to Sorrow and hurt

The dreams tell my tales
Tales of love I wish belonged to me
Tales of things I wish I could become
Tales of happiness I long to holds in my hands

Like seeds it drains away thought the gaps
Slowly losing that what I once held
Hoping it would land in the emptiness inside
And grow into the paths of tomorrow

So many paths inside tangled in the web of life
As the paths ive walked fade from sight
Another’s grow in the places I have yet to tread
Spreading out on paths of future life’s to be told

My thoughts travel back to my mind
Telling me I have yet to find
The answers to the questions of life

But one thing I know…

The paths I walk lead to my own little doom.




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1 posted 2003-06-12 10:16 PM


Lee~
This is quite lovely~
You're very talented ... and it's so nice to have you here~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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2 posted 2003-06-15 02:32 AM


You are so right -- all the way down this well written poem.

Take heart when it's rough ... my three dearest friends have each led lives that from my viewpoint seem to consist mainly of disappointment, pain and sorrow....yet each has been able to climb through it and into the sunlight. One even got rich in the process, retired at 44...He lives in constant pain, but he's happy.

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3 posted 2003-06-15 08:51 AM


This is indeed lovely,
Thanks for sharing
Luv, Liz xxx

"Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~

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