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0 posted 2003-01-07 12:31 PM


Willow leaves fan an aqua sky
A dove trills softly
Elicting a peaceful sigh
Peering up through the branches
To see the brilliant sun
Showing off it's awsome beauty
And keeping the watcher stunned
The wind caresses in a gently sloping roll
Leaving the body refreashed
And cleansing a troubled soul
Beauty and Majesty walk hads entwined
Rest for the weary eyes
And vacation for the mind
A soft blanket of grass
Rests the tired feet
The light wisp of jasemine
Keeps the air smelling sweet
A place were time has no meaning
A place the world forgot
Where dreams become reality
and expressions coherent thought
A place were nature reigns
and where a lost spirit
May find comfort and solace
And be relived of all pain

When I was driving home from work today after school I saw a woman holding a baby in her arms she was crying and so was the baby, and the woman was actually no woman at all she looked about 17. Down the road further I saw a beggar out on the street and he didn't have a coat on, I don't know about other places but here in Washington it's cold this time of year. I got home and was slightly depressed so I wrote of the place I wished I could be at that moment and it came out like this, It does sound kinda nice though, doesn't it??

Live and laugh and make sure to always have Bella Amor (beautiful love)
~Bella~

© Copyright 2003 Bella - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-01-07 01:11 AM


Wow that poem is sooo good! I wish I was there instead of here, for sure! You can write very well! I loved it! Keep up the good work!

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
     *~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

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2 posted 2003-01-07 09:28 AM


That poem was very good.  I wish that I could be in that place too.  It sounds like a beautiful place.  Great poem!

-Jeanette-

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3 posted 2003-01-07 10:31 AM


This poem was REAL good...i liked it alot...keep up the good work...you have a lot of talent!! <3 ya!
LIZ

live,love,and die...but take RISKS..thatz what makes life worth the living, love worth the heartache,and death the new beginning!

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4 posted 2003-01-07 03:21 PM


excellent write, i'd like to go to that place too, keep up the good work.
jeffwillett
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5 posted 2003-01-07 05:41 PM


nice poem, although i enjoyed your earlier works more.
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6 posted 2003-01-08 07:54 PM


Thanks guys! I've been in kind of in a weird mood lately I'm not writing about the stuff I normally write about but I like them anyways! But thanks for all your comments!

Live and laugh and make sure to always have Bella Amor (beautiful love)
~Bella~

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