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jeffwillett
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since 2003-01-04
Posts 86
Texas, US

0 posted 2003-01-04 10:37 PM


-Memories-

The cool breeze.
The summer air.
It reminds me of when,
You were there.

The warm grass.
The cold wood.
We sat all night,
I said all I could.

The long nights.
The late walks.
It makes me think,
Of those endless talks.

So many things,
Remind me of you,
How everyday,
Seemed brand new.

© Copyright 2003 Jeff L Willett - All Rights Reserved
HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17
Posts 495
LI, New York
1 posted 2003-01-04 11:01 PM


Wow!  And I thought the LAST one's were good!  This was a beuatiful little poem.  This one made me smile, really, and I almost NEVER do that, lol.  Seriously, I love this little poem.  And your right, as you said in that reply to Smoothy, you're not so hopeless.  At least she KNOWS how you feel, and didn't turn you down outright.  That's gotta count for something.  As for the future, well, ya just gotta have hope; hope that it'll all work out.
                             *~Rich~*

"You can't hurt meee!!  'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!"

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