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ShadyMakaveli
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since 2002-08-21
Posts 128


0 posted 2003-01-04 08:47 PM


Sorry i know i just posted yesterday, but i had to put this one out here, i wrote this because of a friendship that i have that is currently losing it's enjoyment and is becoming more of a concern than anything else, here's the poem.


I didn't think you'd call
Didn't wanna believe you wouldn't
Watching any sign of hope fall
Do this to you, you know i couldn't

Held our friendship up so high
There's nothing i wouldn't do for you
Can't understand your reasons why
Know with you i've always been true

With that said I must confess
Our lack of communication makes me upset
Poetry the only way I could express
Can't turn my head to this and forget

No secrets is the way I feel
I can't help but think I care more
And that's just me being real
My friendship is not a revolving door

Once your in, your here to stay
Regardless of problems there are solutions
Things won't always go the perfect way
Our friendship is like an evolution

Constantly growing in a new way
But this growth does take two
I'll be there for you without delay
A friendship I need, how about you

I understand you are busy
I'd make time for you
Can't you find some time for me
Or is this friendship not for you

All I want is a friendship that's great
No one could be better than you
We must not waste time before it's too late
So let me know your point of view

© Copyright 2003 ShadyMakaveli - All Rights Reserved
HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17
Posts 495
LI, New York
1 posted 2003-01-04 11:06 PM


Wow!  I think this is great, and I hope your friend reads this and things work out.  I know what it's like to lose a friend...  
                      *~Rich~*

"You can't hurt meee!!  'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!"

[This message has been edited by HopelessRomanticGuy (01-04-2003 11:06 PM).]

dinky
Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258

2 posted 2003-01-10 09:31 PM


hey,
this was reallllly good!
i've been through this b4,
hope it all works out!
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
3 posted 2003-01-15 12:28 PM



Shady~
I think many of us can relate to this in one way or another.
It can be very difficult when a friendship becomes
one-sided, and I hope that doesn't happen with this one.
You've expressed your feelings for your friend very well,
and your heart is showing clearly in this piece.
Your friend is fortunate to have someone who cares so much.
Beautifully done...I hope it all works out.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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