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Teen Poetry #6

Love's first dance

Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

0 posted 2003-01-04 12:29 PM

A song flows through the rain, not knowing what it causes.
Two hearts beat together, and die in eachother's arms.
Bringing two people together, in a fantasy dream world.
How perfect the sight is, to see those two in love.
Staring at eachother, they need one another.
Drifting off together, with no one to bring them back to earth.
Their heart breaks once they leave eachother's side.
There is no point in living, without the other.
Risking everything, just for one dance.
Not caring what anyone else thinks, they only care about what the other feels.
People try to tear them apart, but they are strong enough to fight them.
One night's fate holds them together, and never sets them apart.
Wanting more then just one dance, they plan for the night to never end.
In eachother's arms, they stay for eternity.
Holding on to eachother, nothing can make them part.
Forever staying, in love's first dance.

That Crazy Manatee Speaks Nothing But The Truth!

FLOWERGIRL
Junior Member

since 2003-01-04

Posts 40
the woods of Pa

1 posted 2003-01-04 12:59 PM

My dear your poerty is not bad, I found it moving. The heart wants what the heart wants. Love is a beautiful thing and if we all could be so lucky to have that first dance forever.

Pollita
Member

since 2002-07-25

Posts 220
the unknown realm of insanity

2 posted 2003-01-04 03:20 PM

Yeah I guess they aren't all that bad. and yes I hope that everyone one day will be able to have that first dance forever.
But love is a beautiful thing. and it's also the worst feeling in the world as well as the best.
And I've been in love too much before...it always ends in tears for me.
even though im just 12 I understand alot.
although some people don't think I do because im 12.
I can name one person, but im not gonna.
because thats mean.
well thank you for replying to my poem!

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