With the night sky, You'll see that I love you.

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WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

0 posted 2003-01-04 08:48 AM

The moon shines
above me lighting
the sky and making the
stars visible.
The eyes of my
love shines upon you
like a mother tending
to her young.
A star twinkles,
a planes flies by,
the moon just sits there
while doing it's job.
I see no one but you,
I feel no one but you,
I want no one but you.

Each star will burn out
when it's turn comes,
but mine never will.
I should just say that
I love you.
But that'd do no good.
We're like the stars,
The distance to far,
and it will always burn out,
but I will always love you.

To try and hide the love
in the darkness is wrong.
So I'll let the moon shine
through me so you can see
that I really do love you.
"What am I doing?" I ask myself.
With no answer, my love
carries on and passes through
your heart and then let go like
it was nothing.

I've done what I could
to show that I love you,
but now I leave it to you
to figure the rest.
Look at the moon,
Look at the stars,
They are telling you,
that I love you.

*Mistakes are made, you pay for them, then you do it again.*
~*~Love doesn't make the world go 'round, it just makes the ride worthwhile~*~

[This message has been edited by Acies (02-06-2003 12:59 PM).]

Smoothy
Member

since 2002-12-02

Posts 119
The dark side of the moon

1 posted 2003-01-04 08:52 AM

Ah, love poetry. For some, the easiest to write. For others, the easiest to connect to. For all, it,s easy to understand. For me, it happens to be all three. Good job.

Love conquers all, so I must be in a losing battle.

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

2 posted 2003-01-04 11:26 PM

LOL!  ^ He still dosen't know who you are!  LOL!

*sobs*  It's....so... beuatiful!... lol.  *sigh* It's a great poem, I really enjoyed it, a refreshing refrain to the past, if only for a moment.  I'm sure whoever this is about (^.-) get's the message.  I'm also sure his face turned red when he realized *he* was the subject.. lol.  I'll have to look up more often when i'm outside at night, though I got a nice look at the sky tonight, when the power went out.  Yes, the stars do make great mesengers, carrying messages of love to those too far apart to speak the words themselves.  Even if one is unsure of where he stands, as I am.  (I'm listening to a love song that inspired these words, "When You Love A Woman" by Bryan Adams)
                          *~Rich~*

"You can't hurt meee!! 'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!"

jeffwillett
Member

since 2003-01-04

Posts 86
Texas, US

3 posted 2003-01-05 10:20 PM

good poem but i had a hard time reading it

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2003-02-06 12:59 PM

beautifully written
hope to see more in the future
thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

chupdacabra
New Member

since 2003-02-10

Posts 3
New Jersey, USA

5 posted 2003-02-10 10:12 PM

that was very good. i really liked the poem. i hope your star never dies out.
****Ricardo****

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