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VirgoLover04
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since 2003-01-02
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California, Good ol' USA

0 posted 2003-01-02 11:52 PM



Shame
Cloudy days, sleepless nights remanicing of you
unforgettable memories.. my hurt shines through
Tears fall softly and I tremble too much
Looking at the stars...longing for your touch
Blowing winds, fake smile, broken heart
The life that once was a fairy tale has now fallen apart
Little girl too innocent and life slapped her in the face
I am so alone I am so out of place
Too ashamed, as my head is low
And yet I still have to face tomorrow
And now I am left with all of this pain
My heart is Broken and my life is a shame..


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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448
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1 posted 2003-01-03 02:29 AM


Never in shame! No one can judge you, including yourself beside God!

This is a great poem, it is touching and emotional.

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

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