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StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

0 posted 2003-01-02 08:46 PM

Throw rocks at my window.
We can meet in some romantic meadow,
Under a star filled moonlit sky,
With the fragrance of late spring blowing through our hair.
My face will be flushed from the secrecy of our midnight rendezvous,
And maybe also from the way you'll hold my hand,
As we run through grass that's grown too tall.
And then we'll stop at some beautiful clearing,
With no one around to tell us we're too young.
And we'll talk like we're in movies,
With whispered feelings put into perfect words,
Finally with our passion overflowing,
Our love will be realized.
In just one brief physical action,
I'll give you myself.
And it will be perfectly perfect,
And we'll kiss like we're in movies.

"It's hard to look in the mirror these days when everyone has everything you'd rather be."-Saves The Day

StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

1 posted 2003-01-04 06:00 PM

That little zero next to this post is making me sad. Sooo I'm just gonna bump this up in hopes that someone will take pity and read it.

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

2 posted 2003-01-20 06:09 PM

heya
lol can't have people sad now can we? dunno why no one responded...PIP is just getting weird lately...anywho..about the poem. it's very sweet (obviously) and it does indeed have some good stanzas...i am just in a cynical mood so don't mind me if something i say it crazy bitchy. although...i didn't really find much wrong with it...it was cheesy, but then again, sometimes life calls for cheese =) be happy!
-Bergundy-

"crack my head open, on your kitchen floor. to prove to you, that i have brains." -Alkaline Trio

StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

3 posted 2003-01-20 07:03 PM

Wow. Someone finally responded to this one. And yes. It is cheesy. That was the idea. It was supposed to be like on of those cheesy almost too perfect romantic scenes in movies. Anyway. Thanks for reading.

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

4 posted 2003-01-20 10:56 PM

and the Poetry Oscar goes to StellarChica for her astounding performance in "And the Oscar Goes To.."!!!

Elizabeth

Howl at the stars, whisper when you're sleeping, I'll be there to hold you, I'll be there to stop the chills and all the weeping.

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