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Teen Poetry #6

Tragedy

PrincessNets
Member

since 2002-10-30

Posts 103
NewYork, USA

0 posted 2003-01-02 10:51 AM

It got there
The day that I heard.
The news was unfortunate
And it made me so mad.
How could you leave me?
I thought that you loved me!
How could you
Put me through so much pain?
To think of all the agony
Is really such a shame.
I know you've hurt too
And now all your pain is gone.
But here I sit,
Crying, Hurt, Ashamed, and Alone,
Ashamed of what I didn't do
To prevent this tragedy.
Alone because I can't handle
Being around those people.
Crying because of
What has happened to you.
And most of all hurt
Because of your death.

CloudedDreams
Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm

1 posted 2003-01-02 11:40 AM

wow.. this is really sad... I am sorry..this is very emotional, and the words have ability to pierce...

Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it?

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2003-01-02 01:14 PM

That was a very very good poem. It was expressed well. I could feel the emotions through the poem. Well done!

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

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