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Teen Poetry #6

The Unruliness Of Words

LTEvans
Member

since 2002-12-06

Posts 72
Lenham, England

0 posted 2003-01-02 02:30 AM

The Unruliness Of Words

This is no poem…
I am no poet…
These are merely words…
That have not fallen in place…

Discard them…
Discount me…
Discern them…

There are no…
(Words that can express)
Concerns…
(Lines are not landing right)
Breaks…
(My resolve, and depresses)
Snaps…
(My intent)
Syllables…
(Into two pieces)
Shatters…

Reorder the words…
Reopen old wounds…
Revise the words…

That have not fallen in place…
That holds mere words…
And you grasp the pen…
My head is a poem…

Solipsism saves us from the atavism of the Equalitarian.

LTEvans

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2003-01-02 01:26 PM

That as usual was very good! That's all Im gonna expect from you from now on. Greatness.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

Stinky Twinkie
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

2 posted 2003-01-02 03:44 PM

excellent. Stinky Twinkie really liked this one. It had a philosophical feel to it...or at least I thought so.

-Stinky Twinkie-

EleanorMoonbaby
Member

since 2002-09-02

Posts 202
England, UK

3 posted 2003-01-02 05:42 PM

Like it, like it! I found this..... interesting, to say the least. Don't know why I particularly enjoyed this poem, but I did anyways.
Ellie

"I'm terribly sorry ma'am, my karma just ran over your dogma"

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